The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written. God bless you.
05/16/11
Oh, the dialog is excellent! It carried the story along at a fast pace. Well written and exciting! I love that the "hero" is a young girl, too.
An interesting read all the way through. Your writing shows in this well crafted piece
05/17/11
I loved this! Your dialogue was so believable that I felt like I was in the crowd of patriots that day. Your last line was my favorite - very clever! Wonderful writing!