The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/11
Very interesting story, Jim, and very clever entry . It took me a little time to realise exactly who your MC was. (A tentative tip: maybe it would have been clearer if you'd used pidgin Engish?? :-)
05/15/11
Very much enjoyed this. Great details.
I am an avid "birder" and greatly appreciated your story, so well told. Not all the heroes are human and they are probably more noble than we. I love Cher Ami. Thanks for writing this.