The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/11
Love it! Quite unique. (:
So much to like about this...the word play throughout is terrific...and I especially like the twist on outgoing at the end, equated to showing up.
I enjoyede this. I giggled at the name Beanpunk Cafe' and from there you took me on a lovely ride. The ending was truly divine.
05/19/11
Enjoyed this cute and witty story beginning to end...but loved the ending! Well Done!
Congratulations on your second place and EC wins.
Good to see the editor's agreed that this should be a top pick! great story!!
05/19/11
Great piece. I'm so embarassed that your title totally gave it away and I still catch on until she arrived at the church. I'm usually sharper than that. I love the wordplay too, but I most like the unique take on God's pursuit of us and how His idea of "outgoing" and "committed" is someone who shows up. Really, really good job. Thanks for sharing it with us.
05/19/11
Congratulations on your well-deserved placing.
05/19/11
Love the story and the originality Sydney, great job, congrats!!
05/20/11
Congratulations on your deserved win!