The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/11
This is a very ingenious story for this topic. You created suspense and held my attention throughout. Excellent work!
This is a great, original take on the topic. You really showed the anxiety the characters felt in not knowing. But above all, even though it saddens me deeply to even think this, you showed what the world is coming to. Too many laws, not enough faith in our fellow man are just a few reasons the government uses to take away a bit of our freedom and dignity each day.
05/19/11
Quite an unexpected story woven around the challenge word, that feels like an excerpt from a longer piece of intrigue.
Story shows realistic slices of human nature!