The Official Writing Challenge
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Truly remarkable in every sense! Form, style,! Unique, creative, interesting, amazingly descriptive, and to-the-point. I love it!!! :-)

oh, i LOVE this! It took me a bit to realize it was the "great fish and Jonah".. but once I did, I'm thinking, "Wow!" I love your word choices. Your work is exquisite!
Oooooh, I love this. Truly. I guessed part way through who or what this fish was. Special fish indeed. Nice job - very original:)
This is wonderful. I'm so glad yon had the Jonah reference because that is what was pictured inmy mind, but I was afraid maybe I was off base, but it was such A beautiful image, I didn't know how I could have doubts myself.
Congratulations for placing 10th in Masters and 14 overall!
Simply beautiful artistry of words!