The Official Writing Challenge
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It's amazing the lengths God goes to just to teach us a lesson. Your story was a delight, you had vivid descriptions, and charming characters.
05/08/11
Poor old Barb, making a spectacle of herself like that...
I like how you have woven a moral into the story without any slip into preaching.
Well done.
05/10/11
I have had a few lessons in my life like Barb! LOL God is so good to us, even when we're griping and complaining. Thanks for your good story! God bless!
05/13/11
Oh the lessons God has to teach us sometimes! Well written!
Congratulations for placing 9th in level 3!