The Official Writing Challenge
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It's amazing the lengths God goes to just to teach us a lesson. Your story was a delight, you had vivid descriptions, and charming characters.
Poor old Barb, making a spectacle of herself like that...
I like how you have woven a moral into the story without any slip into preaching.
Well done.
I have had a few lessons in my life like Barb! LOL God is so good to us, even when we're griping and complaining. Thanks for your good story! God bless!
Oh the lessons God has to teach us sometimes! Well written!
Congratulations for placing 9th in level 3!