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05/06/11
This is a great piece and well written. Thanks so much for sharing your work.
05/06/11
Lots of emotional energy packed in here. Kept me going the whole way through.
05/08/11
First of all - awesome title in so many ways:) Pastor burnout is very sad and should be written about more often. Thank you for addressing it like you did.

Very nice job. You really twisted the ending up. Very unexpected indeed:)
05/11/11
Excellent writing! I was able to feel the intensity through the entire story. You've successfully captured the readers' attention from start to end. Glad the closure leaves a glimpse of hope.