The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/11
I loved the progression of Search, Cry & Long in this piece. Well written! Thanks for sharing your work.
05/09/11
Haunting, unrequited love! Your alliteration is beautiful, "That surfs the surface of superficiality…" …and your ending uplifts and soars! I love your poem's gracefulness and grace-filled message.
Congratulations for placing 8th in Masters and 12 overall!