The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh Man! That's scary!
It would make it easier to read if you left an extra line between paragraphs.
Now, to make sure my cell phone is charged...
I love how you "broke down" the stereotypes here. Nicely done. You definitely had me scared.
Good story! You kept my attention all the way through. God does watch over us. Thank you.
I love how you have overturned my expectations of a sugary answer to prayer with the honesty of real life, and skilfully infused it with a touch of divine humour.
Minor picky point: you misspelled "border" as "boarder;" and I echo the request for more spacing between those very well-written paragraphs.
The title was great.
I echo the spacing suggestions! Detracts when it all runs together!

But still this was a well written, vivid and emotional read! I love the ending about God seeing behind the masks! Great job!
Congratulations for placing 6th in level 3!
Agree that this is a scary picture of what, all too often, makes someone a crime statistic. Funny about those "masks," but Satan is the duke of deception, isn't he.