The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/11
This was a very moving piece! I could visualize each scene. Well written! God bless!
05/10/11
Oh wow! Great imagery and uses of repetition and assonance. I expected the "refrain" of her turning again at the end.
Congratulations on your first place and EC wins.
05/12/11
Congratulations on your well deserved first place win! This really touched me as my dad had a stroke around Christmas and is still recovering! Such a powerful and visual way to represent the challenge word! Well done!
05/12/11
Deeply moving. Made my heart race and my eyes wet. Most touching phrase:

..and lighting the path
when the blackness suffocated all that she was..

Congragulations.
05/12/11
Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Very thought-provoking entry.