The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/11
It's always great to have a friend that will point us in the right direction.
I suggest you leave an extra line between paragraphs to make it easier for the reader.
Good use of dialogue. Keep writing!
05/10/11
You did a great job with the internal dialogue especially. What a wonderful testimony she was.
05/10/11
Good story. I like the mental dialogue. Thank you.
05/13/11
I agree with Yvonne’s comment about the line spacing, detracts when everything runs together.
But I liked the story and it is true, so many times we are all put in situations where our testimony can be a great help to others, and we should share it.

Many marriages could be saved if they would only put God in the center!