The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/11
I am sitting here puzzling over the ending. Why is the police officer smiling if this came to a bad ending? did I miss something?
Still, the writing drew me in and carried me along.
05/05/11
OK< duh, the light goes on as I read it again!! Now we really have a chilling ending. Good writing!
05/05/11
This drew me in from the beginning and the twist at the end was twisted but compelling. Great writing!
05/06/11
Oh, man! You totally hooked me on this one - I assumed this would end up with a nice, happy, learned-her-lesson type of ending. Nope! You literally made my mouth hang open with your superb ending - I've got chills! Excellent job!
05/06/11
Excellent! I can see the team from "Criminal Minds" already getting their gear together to come and, hopefully, rescue her and catch the crooked cop!
05/09/11
Wow sounds like an Agatha Christie mystery to me... Had me hooked :)
Congratulations for placing 12th in Masters and 17 overall!