The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this main character...very indepth for such a short story -- the word "guileless" comes to mind. This is a wedding I would like to attend! Also, the two different uses of the challenge word in the opening and the closing is done very nicely.
What a sweet story! I love this: "My wedding planner is the perfect man, Kristy laughs. My Manuel is still under construction,..."
Reading this just plain made me smile!
Oh yeah that was clever, the two different uses of the theme word.

Touching story. Brought out the true meaning of a wedding.
You have drawn your characters and their emotions very well, but I feel the dialogue would be easier to follow with clear punctuation.