The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this main character...very indepth for such a short story -- the word "guileless" comes to mind. This is a wedding I would like to attend! Also, the two different uses of the challenge word in the opening and the closing is done very nicely.
05/05/11
What a sweet story! I love this: "My wedding planner is the perfect man, Kristy laughs. My Manuel is still under construction,..."
Reading this just plain made me smile!
05/05/11
Oh yeah that was clever, the two different uses of the theme word.

Touching story. Brought out the true meaning of a wedding.
05/08/11
You have drawn your characters and their emotions very well, but I feel the dialogue would be easier to follow with clear punctuation.