The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/11
This has to be one of the stangest stories I have ever read LOL...all I have to say is it is certainly original and unique!

Seems an excerpt from a longer tale, one I would love to read in full! LOL
05/05/11
I meant "strangest" stories...this review posting place needs a correct option for people like me! LOL
05/05/11
An interesting story, with such a jump after the ellipses that no reader's curiosity is in danger of 'stag'nating.
05/09/11
Okay...I'm echoing the first comments - this story is downright weird. There is no doubt however that it is well written and interesting. It took a courageous soul to hit "submit" on this one and I commend you on posting publicly something that I would have probably buried after I burned it. :) Seriously this a good piece of writing that makes you finish reading it even after you're not sure you want to know how it ends. Good job.
05/09/11
Ditto the above...this story kept me engaged because I wanted to understand it. Ultimately I was disappointed because I don't understand it. I think if you helped us understand what's going on here (are these hunters? Indians? Aliens?) this might be a great story.