The Official Writing Challenge
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A sad, riveting read. Yet, even in our trials, God is there. Good writing.
05/07/11
This was powerful and compelling. You did an excellent job of telling us so much with the limited word space. Excellent job!
05/09/11
You have drawn us into the heartache and confusion in your MC's heart, but the word limit has impinged on some details, like her rescue from the water. Apart from that, the scenario is strong and credible.
05/12/11
Yes, the word limit we have here can really impact a story and I too thought that here. I too found myself wanting more, but realizing the limits. I especially wanted more at the end, finding out what Sharon did with her life after that, how God directed her. I hope you expand on this yourself. Such a sad story that shows casualties of war extend far beyond the battle field! Good read!