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04/29/11
Very creative take on a familiar story. Love the way you've modernised it.
05/03/11
Neat modern take on the story. I enjoyed the twist, as I was expecting it to be about some seemingly "small" deed that Jacob had done. Fun read.
05/03/11
Ahhhh...Love this story! Outstanding job!!!!
Well done! You chose a creative way to recreate this story in a modern setting, and you kept me engaged throughout.
05/03/11
What a wonderfully creative way to tell the Good Samaritan story. I love your creative use of the name "Jacob Smallbody." Super work!
05/04/11
Well done indeed! You kept me engaged and added a little suspense as well.
Congratulations on ranking 9th in level 4 and 12th overall!