The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/11
I had almost stopped breathing by the time I reached the end. This was truly awesome; loved your use of words, the simplicity which allows the mind to complete the picture. Beautiful work.
04/29/11
Simple construction with a profound message
Sometimes our hearts simply need to shout out with joyful wonder of the birth of our Savior. When it's done so well, as you have done, it's a pleasure to read and celebrate with the words of the author. Great job!
Profoundly beautiful. You're an excellent poet.
05/02/11
Astounding use of words--painting this account--in quite a different way. Thank you!
Congratulations on ranking 11th in level 4 and 15th overall!