The Official Writing Challenge
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: ) Loved your little tale. It's not easy to bring animals to life making it believable while throwing in a good moral lesson in on the sly as well. But you've done it here. Great job!
A tale well told...and fun to read, yet with a clear message.
Creative, fun and excellent! Love the creative names, especially Kustow. And I can just see those bad boy catfish! Glad little Squirt got a second chance to eat his “veggies”.
05/02/11
A very clever little fable, though the moral may prompt some de-bait. But seriously, it was good fun.
05/03/11
First, I LOVE your title. :) Your message is excellent and so relevant for today! I think I've known quite a few "Squirt's" in my lifetime. "Fun" -- hardly begins to describe this!