The Official Writing Challenge
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You have created another masterpiece with your beautiful imagery, and with well chosen words, you revealed a happy marriage.
04/29/11
This was nice - sad and poignant, but well-written. I enjoyed it - good job!
04/29/11
Your descriptions of the water and barrel are amazing - a memorable story :)
Lovely, simply lovely. This is the kind of story that needs to be read out loud and I did so, nearly losing it when I got to the part about the pennies in the barrel. Somehow that just really got to me.
Tenderly told with memorable word pictures. Well done.
05/02/11
Beautifully written! Sensitive and poignant!
05/03/11
The rain was a perfect compliment to the tone and sorrow of your story. You so masterfully give your reader a tangible picture to set up your story. And their hope shines through (love the rain barrel with the copper pennies). Gorgeous writing!
You paint masterpieces with words. Intrigued with boiling water of the rain barrel cooling her hand.