The Official Writing Challenge
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This story is geared to go. Ulysses has shifted from low-gear to high-gear, and his dream is rolling along with an inspirational payload. Children will like this story, I'm sure. Well done.
Long past childhood...I enjoyed this story very much. The personification of the ute makes it more interesting and would make for some great pictures. The message is clear.
05/02/11
This story reminded me of the Disney movie Cars. Very nicely written. I think any little boy would love it.
05/02/11
An enjoyable read! We certainly don't have to be big to be noticed by the world if we show them Christ in us.
05/03/11
Ok, I had to laugh at the "ute" .. "to take his wife to church on Sundays, and his pigs to market on Mondays" (that would BE OUR FAMILY!) :) After reading your end-notes, I feel enlightened. [Thanks for helping some of us out!] We could use a vehicle like Ulysses for some of our off-road adventures here in AZ. :) You need an illustrator for this. I'd love to read it to my grandson! Great work! Let us know when you finish the series!
Congratulations on ranking 9th in level 3!