The Official Writing Challenge
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Cleverly written, and such an amusing tale of mistaken identity. Great job! God bless!
A lot of people with the same name makes for a good amount of confusion. Your story was well written and I think the best part was the unsympathetic judge. I didn't like him at all.
Very well done. All that drama and the comic relief at the end.
Great job, really enjoyed reading this well told story.
Tsk tsk, flouting justice!!! But very enjoyable and well written.
LOL! The tension was palpable! I was even feeling sorry for the calves. :) This is a great story, and I love the ending!
Congratulations on your Highly Commended award.
Well done Virgil, for your placing.
You write they will read it! I love your stories they hook me every time. Well done and congratulations. It was real, it was believable as was the tension both created and resolved.
Oh, this is good!!! Humorous with a flavor of tension and a little suspense woven through the miscommunication and mistaken identity.I could feel the frustration and uncertainty in your main character. Well done!