The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/11
Interesting!
I was a bit confused, but I gathered they were time-traveling- thus the confusion.
Good use of dialogue.
05/04/11
Wasn't quite sure where this story took place. Interesting characters. Thank you.
Congratulations on ranking 8th in level 4 and 11th overall!