The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/11
Outstanding story of God's faithfulness! Just a little advice: put a space between your paragraphs for easier reading, and watch spelling and punctuation. You have a superb ability to tell a story. Keep writing and God bless!
04/30/11
I love your take on the theme. I felt Regina's despair as she drove toward the after school center, but I think you could have shortened the earlier part of it a bit.
05/03/11
A quietly reassuring story of God's provision. Well written.