The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/11
Beautifully written! Thanks for sharing! You have great talent! God bless!
05/03/11
I am not a poet, by any stretch, and I'm definitely not qualified to criticque someone else's poetry and so I am usually reluctant to comment on the ones I come across in the challenge. However, this one drew me in. I don't really know why I enjoyed it, but I did. It seemed a whimsical parody, but flowed as beautifully as any serious minded poem I've ever read.
I don't think I'm making much sense, so let's just leave it at "I like it" a lot, I'm just not smart enough to tell you why. :)
05/03/11
I like it too, and I don't know why either. It just gets a grip. Well done.
This draws me in (immediately with the first word!) and I want to go stare at the ocean. Very provocative and dreamy...I love the images, the word choices and the meter is intriguing
Congratulations on your highly commended award.
05/05/11
Congratulations on your ranking, you obviously affected the judge as well - for positive reasons.