The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/11
Spoken as only a grandparent could! Very moving - my mother and grandmother heart felt ever word. Beautifully written. God bless!
05/03/11
Good story from a grandparent's POV. Thank you.
05/03/11
You did such a good job of conveying how the grandmother in your story felt about meeting her grandson again after a couple of important years had passed. You made me feel what she felt and that is the mark of great writing. Thank you.
05/03/11
You have brought us into a grandma's mind with clarity, insight and warmth despite the uncertainty that could easily overwhelm her. Poignant stuff! Well done.
Congratulations on ranking 6th in level 3!