The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice thought, well expressed. God bless you.
05/03/11
Nice descriptive poem. Thank you.
05/03/11
Simple and profound quality here. Your pictures and your rhythm lead us through the flow, though I found some thoughts that continued onto the next line were interrupted by a few too many commas. I suggest you check out Jan Ackerson's poets' corner with this entry, because she could give a far better appraisal than me.