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05/01/11
So much truth in the details of your story! Keep writing and God bless!
05/03/11
Good story. Paths people take on the way to the Truth. Thank you.
05/03/11
A "good one" for sure. I love not only the MC's perspective, but also how God managed to use this old, dying, dementia-ridden missionary one more time.

Nice work - thanks for writing it!
Your story tugged at my heart. I, too, walked that stony path of self-esteem, thinking that I needed to be outstanding. It took a number of failures before I found that golden road at last and glided down the untroubled path of humility. All striving must cease before true growth can begin. Great job! God bless you.
05/03/11
Beautiful in its honesty and simplicity. As I read through, I felt you were taking us through an updated Ecclesiastes, but you earthed it so well from a totally-unexpected direction.
And your title applies equally to your MC and to the old man.
Congratulations on ranking 7th in level 3!