The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a sad story. There are so many kids that don't have anyone to turn to. It would be even better with more showing than telling. The characters really touched my heart and the scripture complemented the story nicely.
04/27/11
Would love more detail about this little girl and what she went through. My heart breaks for her, and others like her.
04/28/11
You have tenderly touched a painful reality that I hope is not part of your own experience.