The Official Writing Challenge
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04/27/11
Interesting take on the topic. I've even heard someone saying that gravity doesn't exist. Thank you.
04/27/11
A bump in the flow for me came with this sentence: “The widow of a Navy man spoke emotionally of this.” I expected there to be a quote from her. And I think it would’ve been okay to refer by name to those you quoted within the article rather than footnote them. Overall I think it’s a well-written article. Thank you for sharing it with us.