The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this story! At first I was thinking that it would be a bit hum drum, school-marmish, if you will. LOL! But you got me to tear up and then giggle with the solution to the MC’s problem. And at the end, you got an “Aaaaaah” from me too.
Lovely story about the give and take in life. Reminded me of the book "Christy." I enjoyed your story very much.
04/23/11
I love the ending! I wanted to cry. :) A great story.
04/28/11
Sweet! Your story evoked tears about mid-way through. 'nuf said. :)