The Official Writing Challenge
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This is such a sad story. I hoped he found what he was looking for. You did A nice job with this crusty but loveable man.
04/27/11
Great characterization. Enjoyed this very much.
Congratulations in placing 6th in level 3 and 14th overall.
05/04/11
Everyone's life is a book, no matter how sorry their life seems to be, and you have made Cal's an interesting one (whether based on a real person or not, you made Cal real to me) I wanted more, but maybe it's enough to believe that somehow he made it to his daughter before it was too late! Enjoyed! Good job!