The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/11
I enjoyed this what a great_way to handle humility .I loved your characters and wanted to read more.
04/22/11
Loved your main character and the touch of humor that rolled through the story beside the plastic red Target cart. Well done!
04/26/11
Great descriptions! George’s dialect made me wonder where he’s from and how he got to where he is now. I liked how in his simplicity he knows the way to meet another’s need.
04/26/11
A cute amusing story I enjoyed - and very well written. I find your writing very interesting.
04/28/11
Great story! I enjoyed George very much. The details, his accent, and his thoughts all made him come to life. I loved the ending, too. ;)
04/28/11
Congratulations in placing 7th in level 3 and 15th overall.
04/28/11
Three cheers Amanda! Congrats for placing in your level and in the top 30! :)
05/04/11
Couldn't help but love old George! LOL Story shows so many different faces of human nature so well. Enjoyed the read!