The Official Writing Challenge
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04/22/11
This is so sweet and touching! Just a small act of love can mean so much.

Great job on this lovely little ballad.
04/23/11
And a child shall lead them. This poem had suspense and provoked a deep sense of empathy in me. Well done!
04/28/11
Congratulations on your third place win.
04/28/11
This is beautifully written, for its mix of ugliness being conquered by innocence. As I read I began to hear echoes of "The Fool on a Hill," by Lennon and McCartney, but you went far deeper. Congratulations on your placing.
04/28/11
Congratulations! You gave us a real feel for the heart of both the child and the man. Compelling and well written.
04/29/11
Great job Danielle, congratulations!
05/05/11
He is "need"...waiting...she is "love"..rescuing, in between them "hate" and "indifference"...
all so vividly personified in this WONDERFUL poem!! KUDOS! Enjoyed!