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Your story reminds me of the old saying- But for the grace of God there go I, People have a hard time picturing themselves homeless, or sick. It only happens to others.

Fourteen years ago I sunk into a deep depression. I lose 90% of my friends. At first I was angry and thought it was disgust that I saw in their eyes but it was fear ~ that if it happened to me, it could happen to them.

Your story did an excellent job of showing just that. The character could be anyone of us but God is just waiting for us. I love the messages in your story. Outstanding!-
04/24/11
What a powerful story. It really could be any of us. Very humbling piece, nicely done.
04/27/11
This touched me on so many levels. This piece is thought provoking and I believe will minister to many. Thank you.
04/28/11
I love the double message given here, the call to help those in need but also the danger in waiting to accept what God offers before it is too late. Enjoyed the read.