The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/11
I liked this piece. The MC's voice is great and I could hear him tell the story as it unfolded.
great story -- I especially like how the end, "that's my job" ties into that theme introduce in the beginning. You get inside his head in a very empathetic and realistic way
04/23/11
I thought this was very interesting to read and showed well the complexities homelessness. I like that the MC wasn't one dimensional. Good job!
I really enjoyed this piece. The MC seemed so real andI could picture him on his corner. This is one of my favorites this week.
04/26/11
I enjoyed the "mind-rambling" presentation of this, made it seem very real.

I love the way it ended with the praying being the MC's job, certainly gives a different perspective of his being out there.

Well done!
04/27/11
This was quite funny. I enjoyed it immensely.
04/28/11
I was wondering what his "job" was, right up to the end. Good on you for leading me there.
Congratulations on your highly commended win.
04/29/11
I love it Sydney, great story, congratulations on your mention!