The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/11
My favorite line: "you can still find some good in the midst of the bad."
04/22/11
I really like this - it would be really great set to music.
04/23/11
A beautiful, moving piece of poetry here. I've wished for a talent which expresses such feelings and thoughts without blasting the reader with guilt-inducing preaching. Well done!
04/26/11
Beautiful. You tell a great story with wonderful emotion.
04/27/11
Very nice, very easy to read and tells a great story.