The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/11
This poem took my breath away... how astute... how insightful... how relevant to where we are. I think you have a message for the masses with this poem. (And quite probably a winner as well.)
04/21/11
What insight is incorporated in this poem! Great writing!
This is so true, and makes us think. I had written one similar to this, actually it's a song, but was trying to put it more into poem format. How sad that we treat our heavenly father, our creator like a genie, coming to Him with greed and our own concocted expectations when He knows better. Thank the Lord that He doesn't always give us every wish we blindly desire. Thank you for your candidness and making it into a well written free verse. Love this!Lord bless you.
04/23/11
This is an impressive piece of writing, insightful, very readable and very convicting for those of us getting complacent about our prayer life.