The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/11
Tightly written, great dialogue. Loved the object lesson. Be on the lookout for misplaced quote marks.
04/18/11
Great dialogue, and a creative take on the topic.
Vivid description; I could feel the water on a hot day. Wise youth worker. This belongs in a magazine for youth workers!
04/21/11
Awesome! Great setting and great lesson taught. Isn't it amazing how God will give us just the right thing to say when we ask Him?
Congratulations on ranking 21st overall.
04/28/11
Yay! In the highest rankings for outbreak! :D