The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/11
A lovely story of mustard seed faith.
04/14/11
Warmly and evocatively told. One fault was that you should have sat on a couch instead of a chair, then we might have had more room to fit as we sat there, drawn into reading this with you.
04/14/11
A second reading makes me so happy that you sat on a couch so we could all join you. Please ignore the second part of my earlier comment......
What a lovely story it took me right back-to the Little House shows. You did a nice job with bringing the past to life.
04/18/11
What a wonderful story. We hear so often that old phrase, "those who forget the past are doomed to repeat it" - what's so wrong with a little repetition? Thanks for sharing this with us.
It is not easy bringing the past to life, but you've done it here. Your cast of characters are intriguing as surely as you've shown their lives to be. Good job in telling their story.
Congratulations for placing 11th in level three!