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10/17/05
This was sweet! Thank you for sharing! But...what *did* happen to the fruitcake? And does it have a lovely crust of mold from being passed down so many times? Is it new each year? Very creative!
10/17/05
What a fun story! There are a few typos, but they don't detract from the enjoyability. Good job!
Funny, whimsical, nice... I can imagine the package, the fruit, the interchange.... nice read.
10/17/05
That was cute. I especially liked the end where he got bopped on the head.
An absolutely delightful and endearing read! You put your reader 'right there'!
10/18/05
Lovely - you describe a beautiful family scene which many of us can identify with. Great title too!
10/20/05
I agree about the family scene..you described it perfectly as though you spent Christmas day at our house!
10/20/05
How sweet. I love it!
10/22/05
AWWWW...that was so sweet--and vintage. It was better than fruit-cake. A gift with a purpose and meaning. Delightful. God bless ya, littlelight
10/23/05
I'm left wondering if this is a true holiday story for you. Sweet like the apples! They sure are Better than fruitcake! Enjoyed! Jo