The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/11
You showed what the term "play on words" really means. I may have detected a run on sentence, but in no way takes away from the narrative. Title was perfect!
04/14/11
What an exciting read! I didn't catch the play on words until I reached Mayor Cam Payne, at which point I returned to the beginning and started again (with a smile this time!). And the prayer at the end was beautiful and clever. So very well done.
04/15/11
Delightful!
Ask and you shall receive. A delightful story, sure 'nuff.
Wonderful story with a super ending--so happy to see in EC.
This was so much fun to read! I enjoyed all the names, and of course the prayer. Congrats on your EC!
Made me belly laugh!!
04/21/11
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed the play on words with all the names. Thank you for sharing your work.
04/27/11
Awesome messasge, funny, delightful...I will come back to this one more than once! Congrats on your win! WELL deserved.