The Official Writing Challenge
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You showed what the term "play on words" really means. I may have detected a run on sentence, but in no way takes away from the narrative. Title was perfect!
What an exciting read! I didn't catch the play on words until I reached Mayor Cam Payne, at which point I returned to the beginning and started again (with a smile this time!). And the prayer at the end was beautiful and clever. So very well done.
Ask and you shall receive. A delightful story, sure 'nuff.
Wonderful story with a super ending--so happy to see in EC.
This was so much fun to read! I enjoyed all the names, and of course the prayer. Congrats on your EC!
Made me belly laugh!!
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed the play on words with all the names. Thank you for sharing your work.
Awesome messasge, funny, delightful...I will come back to this one more than once! Congrats on your win! WELL deserved.