The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/11
You did a fantastic, crack-up job! Held my attention right to the end. Creative, and entertaining. Had to pull out a few memories from my nursing days with OCD.:-)

In my opinion, a real fun piece.
04/14/11
A tale delightfully told! Thoroughly enjoyable! This was definitely a "breakout"!
04/15/11
Great story! I love your characterizations of both eagles, and the touches of humor seeded throughout. Wonderful!
04/15/11
You have written a tree-topper for sure. Enjoyable.
04/16/11
Oh I love this delightful story. It could be great for kids but just as wonderful for adults. I really liked the part of the eagle feeling depressed! Just wonderful.
04/16/11
Made me laugh!--so clever!
04/16/11
Wow! VERY creative! Loved the cute story. My only hang up was I wasn't crazy about her attitude toward her mate. But the story was lots of fun to read and well written.
04/19/11
Hey if people can confuse their there and they're don't worry about dam and that other word. I didn't notice it until you mentioned it. The story was still great, but I can understand your Oh no feeling:)
04/19/11
This is just gorgeous! Thanks for the laugh and the great message(s) found throughout.
04/21/11
Not surprised. Congrats on your EC
04/27/11
OCD, depression, conflict, love...you got it ALL in so entertainingly! Congrats on your win!
07/03/11
Kathryn, I'm going to use this delightful story on the Front Page showcase for the week of July 4. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!