The Official Writing Challenge
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04/16/11
This is straight out of a nightmare I used to have often as a child. Born in themidst of the Cuban missile Crises and the Vietnam War I remember feeling afraid. After all Hell is the complete separation from God andyou showed this in a way many will understand Great writing
04/16/11
You have wonderful imagery in your cautionary tale.
04/18/11
A sobering message. Well done.
04/26/11
Congratulations on placing 9th in Masters and 12th overall.