The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/11
So many fascinating images here, and your writing is quite evocative. There were a few places I found it a bit hard to follow, but it could just be my kids distracting me. Very nicely done!
It reminded me of the Screwtape Letters. A view of the darkness with strong reminders of the light. It held my attention.
Congratulations for ranking 25th overall,