The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/11
Cleverly done!
Oh this is too precious!
How much like that little kitty I feel at times.
04/17/11
Very nice!
Very cute story. You did a good job of revealing just a little of the setting at a time.
04/19/11
I liked how you used the element of suspense and surprise to move your story along. I found the use of "she" a bit repetitive.
Animal lovers willl smile at this one.:-)
What a ride you took me. at first I naturally thought of dying, then being born and I loved the surprise of the frightened kitten. Oh how often I'm an afraid kitty. Well-done!
04/27/11
David, you inched us to a good outcome...light! Thank you for keeping it interesting for us...and then the kitty! :)