The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the pacing and rhythm of this piece. So often verse of this type fails to really tell a complete story with a beginning middle and end, but you deftly accomplished that task and in the good kind of rambling...the kind that's like a a Sunday drive down a bumpy country road - it has a style all it's own. Thanks!
I enjoyed this poem andhave had several conversations about this very topic with my son who isgoing to school to be a minister. The lighthearted poem will encourage more people to examine their beliefs. Nicely done.
I think when we get to heaven, we will find that some things we considered as so important, didn't really matter that much to God, and things we overlooked were important. Raised in the same belief, as an older, mature Christian, I see the good and the bad in it, oh, flawed and imperfect creatures that we are!. Most importantly, it is always the heart that is important to God. Such a good piece, I thoroughly enjoyed it. God bless and thanks for sharing.