The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/11
What a beautiful poem. I love this.
03/19/11
This just seemed to flow from your pen. Well done.
03/20/11
I couldn't read this without singing it. So simple, deep and full of truth. Excellent writing. Just love it.
03/20/11
What a beautiful song in the night. It was quite stirring and peaceful at the same time.

This poem captured my heart.
03/20/11
Lovely work. Seamless flow. Excellent.
Assuredly, a beautiful song disguised as poetry.
Beautiful. Love the perspective, and done as a poem! Original, seamless, and unexpected. Well done!
03/21/11
The power of Jesus' love is apparent even in dark prison cells. This poem was creatively and beautifully executed.
03/22/11
Nicely composed, an enjoyable read.
03/22/11
An awesome song in the night, indeed!
I love your "song." I'll sing it with you.
This is absolutely beautiful. Although I'm tone deaf and not very musical, when I read your poem it came out as a song. No matter how hard I tried to just read my brain said, no you must sing it and that has never happened to me before.