The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/11
Great title! This was really good. I could feel your MC's pain as she faces yet another move and her peace as she realizes that her true home is with Jesus. I enjoyed this!
03/20/11
This is a story of so many people yet, unlike you, they don't have your faith. This is a very good devotional and very appropriate for this present time.
This is so sad and my heart was breaking for the MC until I got to the last paragraph. It's going to be an awesome home!
03/24/11
My heart aches at this cry for a home. As I was reading, The lyrics of a song kept coming to mind...."This world is not my home, I'm just a passing through...". I believe God knows your heart's desire and has something truly wonderful in store for you.