The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/05
This was beautiful - like poetry. Creative, piercing, and passionate. Thank you!
Oh,yes! Poetry it is! Beautiful imagery.
10/10/05
Magnificent! Emotional and visualy, this piece speaks to me.
Well done, Floyd
This is so beautiful. Wonderful job!
10/11/05
This is beautiful. Simplistic. Heartfelt. Great message!
WOW! Breathtaking work. Love the imagery. Thank you for sharing!
A stunning use of imagery. I loved how the purification process comes full circle. God bless.
10/13/05
Whew - talk about packing a lot into just a few words. This is magnificent!
10/13/05
Beautiful, beautiful allegory.
10/13/05
WOW! Every word evokes emotion and awakens the senses. Powerful writing indeed!
10/13/05
Beautiful. Concise word choices, evokes much feeling and distress. Wonderfully written! :)
10/13/05
I like how this piece reflects the life of Christ. Well crafted story.
10/14/05
A picture is worth a thousand words. You painted a vivid picture in my mind while staying WAY under word count. THAT is a true sign of a born writer.
Magnificent!
Blessings, Lynda
10/14/05
Um, WOW. I don't know what else to say. Very, very powerful!
10/14/05
I can only repeat what has all ready been said. This is beautifully written, and the message is truth.
10/15/05
Beautiful, poetic, layered imagery. Well done.
10/16/05
Wonderful! I loved the imagery.
Crista, This is absolutely BREATHTAKING... Way beyond the average bear! OH MY!!! Have you ever read any of Amy Carmichael's writings? She is one of my all-time favorites, especially when she writes devotionally. Your style reminds me of hers. Such depth and intensity. I don't know how this didn't place, dear friend. I'm sure God will use it elsewhere because it is a contender indeed! Praying it gets in the hands of just the right people. Blessings!