The Official Writing Challenge
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03/20/11
This is very well done and paints a word picture. A pleasure to read.
03/20/11
Can you imagine seeing what John saw? But we will!
03/21/11
This is wonderful - a beautiful poem on the wonderful hope of Heaven. Thankyou
03/21/11
Absolutely lovely. How thrilling and glorious to comtemplate eternity. I loved the third verse. And I also learned a new word... panoply.
03/22/11
From one poet to another--great work! The words seemed to flow so easily--the rhymes did not appear forced and each verse formed pictures in my mind that gave me pause.
This too is comforting and beautiful.
03/26/11
Eternity seems to demand poetic treatment, doesn't it. I love the reference to John getting a peek into heaven. Lovely poem.
04/06/11
Beautifully written poem. Eternity does await for those who accept him. I'm sure John's words can't do justice to the real place.

Congratulations on your EC award.